Leave it on the pitch, Part 1

As we are presenting our pitches next week, we were going to start making our presentations today. We began with a talk from Lorraine about what we should put in the pitch and what order to arrange it, after this, we were free to begin. By conversing with the rest of my group, we decided to each write about what we wrote about in the proposal, meaning I would write about the story narrative and how it would look. I began, but did not get far along the first slide, as I then had to update the collective group proposal we wrote on Monday. After I had changed the layout, punctuation and grammatical errors of the proposal, I went to continue with the pitch. Only to be stopped again to update my Task 1 (the leaflet about animation styles and techniques). I began reading the feedback I had been given for my first draft, but time was not on my side, as it was too late for me to make any of the changes.